|Reviews for Evolution|
| Ivix chapter 12 . 5/11/2011
Great chapter.. I didn't read this story for so long, that i hard to re-read it XP
It's facinating how i can relate with some of the characters xD
just love it.. hopw it doesn't take that much of a time again to see a update )
anyway .. thanks, great story
| nerdimaddi chapter 12 . 5/11/2011
UPDATE!ah! I quite literally did a sqeal of joy when I saw this in my email. I was just thinking of this story the other day, and hoping that you would update soon.
I love this chapter. It's so comical. poor Page. she wanted a taste of the teenage life, but ended up getting a three course meal. not a very good way to start. but i have to admit, Page is histerical when drunk. and Ben! that's so sweet how he came to get them. i have no idea how he found them, but i think its so cute. and when she kissed him and said all of those things, his reactions were so priceless. he was calm and collected, but it seemed like a bunch of emotions were storming right there under the surface. it was so beautiful. I await your next update my pretty ;)
| OnePromise chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
I am literally rolling on the floor with laughter right now. Seriously. I think my sides are caving in on themselves.
| Kat chapter 12 . 5/11/2011
I can do this. You know, this shows that I really love you, and your writing, since I generally don't care so much that I'll try THREE times to write a review. Anyway, I love you lots and lots.
As a recap...
1. You need to write another review, as son as possible. Because you're an amazing writer and the world (and I) need to see more of your story. We need to know how Ben and Page work out :) It's imperative!
2. I love you soo much!
Hugs and kisses,
| cally422 chapter 12 . 5/11/2011
Been waiting so long for this! Fav chapter so far! :)
Hope you update soon!
| OnePromise chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
This was one of the most hilarious things I've ever read in my life! : )
Made me smile loads of smiles : ): ) : )
Love your work! couldn't make a criticism if i tried.
| Kat chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Okay, stupid glitchy site. I will rewrite some version of what I had. Hmph.
SO... "And I"
| Kat chapter 12 . 5/11/2011
More? Please? Pretty please? Pretty please with a cherry on top? I think you honestly might make me spontaneously combust if I don't finish this story. Didn't you hear my pathetic whimper when I finished reading this newest chapter? That means you have a duty to give me more, as soon as possible :) No, really, you're an amazing writer. And I
| Ziixxxitria chapter 11 . 3/27/2011
I really liked this story. I love the amount of detail you put into little things, like Page's fondness of bubble baths and such. You also manage to pack a lot of description into your writing without making walls of text or lists of adjectives. I read the whole thing straight through tonight! Even though most of it was pretty depressing for the characters, and I didn't expect anything other than things would work out somehow, it was still a great story to read and it picked my day up a lot. So thank you for writing this. I hope you never stop writing.
| nerdimaddi chapter 11 . 3/24/2011
Okay, so i bet youll never guess i spent all of last night doing. I wasbreading this story. This awesome and freakin amazing story. I love it. I just freakin love it. The plot... Is deep and involved and evolving. The characters... Dear god i love the characters. Page. I swear, shes an exagerated presonification of me. We both have speech dilemmas and self confidence issues. And ben. yUM. It is so absolutely terrible to love a fictional character this much. My gog, i cant wait for u to update. Ill probably combust with happiness
| fuwafuwafuwari chapter 11 . 3/23/2011
Oh! ANGST! How I love thee! Every story needs some good angst in my opinion. :DD
Thanks for the update! :)
| katcwarrior chapter 11 . 3/16/2011
OMG, you absolutely HAVE to write another chapter. And another. And probably another. RIGHT NOW! I love it. I can't believe you said you weren't that good of a writer. Absolutely way too modest for your own good. Drop whatever you're doing, and write some more! I have to know what happens :) You can have 24 hours to get the next chapter up. J/K, maybe a week. :P I'm being nice! I was about ready to knock down your door and tackle you into writing more, but I instead decided to sit here and politely (yes, politely) type out a glowing review (IT'S AMAZING) and cajole you into writing instead. Aren't you proud of me? 0:)
Lots of love,
| Anna chapter 11 . 3/12/2011
This is one of the best stories I've read on FP. Keep up the good work, and I hope you update soon!
| Eley chapter 11 . 3/12/2011
Hi there, stumbled over your story today and you got me totally hooked. Read it all in one go, well if you dont count the bathroom breaks ;)
So keep up the good work! Really like the journal writing from Bens point of view, it makes it easier to connect to the characters :)
| echo-echo chapter 11 . 3/10/2011
I simply adore Page, she's a whiny teenager but she inner monologues completely remind me of myself when I was her age. I honestly don't have much to say about this story, I just really enjoy it and can't wait to read more. I definitely can feel the shit beginning to hit the fan and I love drama so I'm excited. Keep writing :)