OMG AN UPDATE. can i repeat, as i'm sure i've told you several times before, that i absoluteley love this story? Page feels like such a part of me, with all her pent up rage and inability to talk to people. and her transition between socially inept to slightly less socially awkward is so brilliantly written. her character development is absolutley wonderful, and i love going through this story and seeing how she progressivley changes each chapter. and Ben! dear god did he misinterpret Page or what! she doesn't want to just be best friends you dingis! i mean seriously! that is reading way too much into her words. if anything he should be happy that, at this point, she considers him a best friend. it leaves doors open for... advancement in their relationship *wink wink nudge nudge* and i completeley understand Page's trepidition with the therapist. the first time i ever went to one i was forced to go by my father, and i wasn't any happier than she was. also, WOAH Rachel is a real bitch! maybe i'm forgetting part of the story (it has been a while since i've read it) but i don't remember her displaying such hostility! i mean i always thought she was a bit of a whore, but a bitchy whore is even worse. not to mention Cameron's passive aggressiveness. when Ben finally stepped up and told him to get the joint out of Page's face I was fist pumping the air for chivalry. and even if he didn't stand up for Page to his "friends" i'm glad that he atleast expressed that he didn't like it to Page. Hopefully he'll dump his "girlfriend" soon and get some decent friends.

can't wait for another update! keep up the great work! 3

okay so about my last review, i totally messed up the names, i mistook page for Macy... woops. But yah me and page are so similar its like i'm your character model, except I don't even know you! The part where Page collapsed, so many times have I felt like that! (Never actually collapsed though) but you forgot to mention how your mouth gets all dry and your lips get sticky.

I really love your writing style! It's simple yet elegant and easy to relate too. I also love macy's character because i'm more or less like her! I'm wild and crazy around my circle of friends, but when it comes to strangers and hot guys, I lose the ability to speak in functional english sentences... I can't wait to read more!

Continue please? And jeez I am so frustrated! Cant Ben and Page just get together already? But at the same time I'm like nooo drag it out and keep showing their feelings change! Ugh. So conflicted lol. But I read this story in one shot, didnt evemw pause to go on facebook *gasp* lol. Keep writing :D

I don't know who frustrates me more - Ben or Page...maybe they're both equally frustrating. ;) Thanks for the update.

Rachel just became uber-bitch. why doesn't Ben just dump her? and it was funny how Ben was insulting her more than Page was. The banter was cute :D and and and and this chapter was pretty awesome :) when i saw the email with the link i did a little dance :P my mum walked in and she was pretty much like O.o :P but yeah you updated :D

I'm glad I stumbled upon this story. I loved reading it. You definitely keep up with the humour side of things and made me grin. ;) I like Page and her friends and Ben. I don't quite get why she is the way she is when it comes to her dad - it seems a bit harsh when her mom calls her selfish but then I do wonder why she's so keen on avoiding any interaction with him. Maybe she doesn't want to face reality. Anyway, can't wait to read more.

GAH! this story is so good :P after every chapter i'm literally checking the Romance section to see if there's an update pretty much every day (until i forget to) so i'm glad that it was updated :) i'm really looking forward to the next one :P and i loved the development of Dee's character :) it's so cute that she likes the planetarium :P Merry Christmas :D

Great chapter!

excellent! love it as per usual ;D

FHKWJLKH. Can I please just tell you that YOUR STORY IS SO FREAKING AMAZING? Um. I can? Great. Your story is so freaking amazing.

Page is a totally relatable character, though obviously I can't completely understand her home life, since mine is (thank God) significantly better than hers.

And Ben...oh, Ben. I just want him to be real and I just want him to marry me. Dying to see those blue eyes of his...

Not that I'm totally head-over-heels for your fictional character or anything. Since I'm not. Yeah.

Anyway. I get that you can't update soon all the time, since life is sort of hectic, and I totally don't update in a timely manner either, so it's not just you, but PLEASEEEE just update as soon as you can. Because I want to see Ben break up with Rachel and I want to see Ben get together with Page. They're so cute, I just want to officiate their wedding. Which is weird since I also want to marry Ben. Whatevs, I'm too tired to think about how screwed up that is.

Also, I love Ana. (That's Tristam's girlfriend's name, right?) She's awesome, and I totally understand her longing for Tristam to be more motivated, though I do get that he's attractive and friendly and and all that fun stuff. And...I don't know, it must be so tough for her to love someone so unmotivated, someone so content just being and not achieving.

That being said, I do love Tristam too.

It's awkward, but I'm (probably a little too) emotionally attached to your characters, and I'd love to read more.

So I don't want to rush you, but I just want you to know that your next update is eagerly awaited by myself and (from the number of other reviews you have - how did you get so many anyway? I only have seven!) others.

Thank you for writing this.

Love,

Clash.

Hi! Just found this story and I'm really enjoying it. The tone of the narrator's voice is great. I also love that while you're sticking to one character's perspective, the journals give us a little insight into Ben's mind. But only what he's willing to tell Mr Juarez. It keeps some tension there, kinda keeping your cards close to you. Anyway. I look forward to the next update. :-)

OMG hi i was planning on sleeping at 9 30 just because i was having a chill day today and i need to catch up on my sleeping hours

but then i came across your story and i just couldn't stop and took me some time and now it's 10 20 and URGH IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT

jokes but srsly this is great

please update soon? :-)

update soon, now..yes? XP love love the story!

haha! i love it, shes so overdramatic with people she knows. but with ppl she doesn't know shes a closed mouth. thou question, how does she get to know ppl enough that she can talk normally around them?