| Reviews for Evolution |
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   Lady in Disguise chapter 3 . 7/24/2006 This story is 's my favorite now. PLEASE update soon! |
| BlackBirdDaeth chapter 3 . 7/24/2006 I like your story. It's very cool, but he's a real asshole, isn't he? shit. I wouldn't be able to just stand there and put up with it like Page... I'd have to kick him in the balls or something. what's her last name, by the way? I don't think you ever said... |
| emmy chapter 3 . 7/24/2006 I like it very, very much. Page is actually believable as a shy-ish, rather antisocial teenage girl. I really like her. And then, of course, Ben is gorgeous ... (insert sigh). I have just one question: In chapter one, Ben has green eyes, and in chapter three, he has blue eyes. I assume he wears colored contacts? (Sorry if I'm a little slow.) Anyway, this is brilliant! Please update ASAP! (Tomorrow would be nice ...) emmy |
| rocky19 chapter 2 . 7/22/2006 i love it, cant wait for you to update |
| BlackStrokes chapter 2 . 6/8/2006 Reading chapter two of your story at 5:55 in the morning is one of the few things that I can do and truly admit that I had a good time doing it (seeing as how I am NOT much of a morning person in the summer) So the point being, great job, you are a fantastic writer. |
| Crazy Talk chapter 2 . 6/7/2006 another perfectly executed chapter! And if you could give me the brand name of that miracle bath solution...I might just try to send you roses...or give you ideas on how to bodily harm dear old Ben... ...a herd of five year olds with cattle prods sounds nice... |
| Ollie May chapter 2 . 6/7/2006 heeheehee, great stuff! Ben totally sniffed at her when he was intimidating her, makes me wonder how exactly he's planning on making her miserable. Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next! Ollie May |
| Ollie May chapter 1 . 6/6/2006 It was absolutely fabulous! I loved all of it, especially the primate/rodent discussion. My favorite line, "How can you think that when you’ve never even experienced life with opposable thumbs?" Page's thought process is hilarious, keep up the fantastic work! Ollie May |
| BlackStrokes chapter 1 . 6/4/2006 This story rocks! I already like the characters and that a rarity for only reading the first chapter. And naturally, like any other healthy female, I LOVE the backing up against a wall thing…very hot. UPDATE SOON! |
| Crazy Talk chapter 1 . 6/2/2006 THAT IS THE GREATEST THING I HAVE EVER READ! you are officially one of my favorite people. Congrats. I'd have stared at his ass - shyness or no. this story rocks. You are a great author. And I am done singing your praises. |
| ro-mackenzie chapter 1 . 6/2/2006 It makes me giggle |