You're back! It took so long I thought you'd forgotten about it. Wonderful as always. Pancakes definitely solve everything.

Please update soon!

Wow this chapter literally blew my mind!

Shit just went from bad to fucking WORSE!

I love that you give your readers a snippet of Ben's POV through the journal entries and his entry for this chapter is fucking GOLD!
HE FUCKING LIKES PAGE!
(Please tell me if I'm wrong in my interpretation of the journal entry because I might be blinded with my obsessive search for Ben's act of love for Page)

finally a moment when they're not ripping at each other's throats!

You should update quickly this time, I really wanna know what happens. I hope they get together soon, because quite frankly I'm sure they're tired of fighting it! xD Please continue and not make us wait 10 months. :)

I read this& it was my favourite chapter thus far.;3 I like Ben the cuddler. :3

Yay you updated!
I really liked this chapter, the Ben and Page moments were super cute, it's amazing how much their relationship has progressed!
I think her moments with her father are really special, and are really helping her grow up and try to forgive herself for avoiding her father, and come to terms with her life, as it is, and her future.

For some reason I thought the hug when they finished playing paintball was magical. Especially when she said they make a great 'survival team' and he looks at her all softly and agrees. I feel like that term, 'survival team', is just really them to a T, like their relationship dynamic, and it felt like a really great moment when she said that.

The tornado represents grief. She knows her father's death is approaching, she knows there's nothing she can do to prevent it and its accompanying pain...no matter what she says everyone will get hurt. He will die. At least that's my interpretation. ;) can't wait to find about bens home life. I hope it's real traumatic like he has an abusive dad...I mean for realisms sake not because im a sadist or anything cuz I'm totally not- ok I'll stop now. I like how two bizarre teens are forced to hang with each other. I hope our main character grows the fuck up and fast and accepts help for her anxiety real soon so they can have babies and such. Good story bro. :3 sorry for the rant...

I heart you lots! And this was such a cute chapter! I like how things are finally straightening out a little between Ben and Page. It's such a big step to be thinking about college! Especially because of a boy! Scary. I love the zombie paintball, btw. We totally need to do that sometime! I miss you so much!

Love,

Kat

I just really love this. I only just found it and now I need more. No pressure, but I can't wait for the next chapter.

I stayed awake all last night reading your story, went to school, then came back to finish it. This is awesome! I am emotionally attached to this story.

Yey, I could finally log in with my fanfiction account here _ Next Review will be with an acutal account then :)

I can't tell you how much I love this story! It's great cause you turn things in another, unexpected way.
Instead of cliché like letting Page (I love her full name xD) date that Andrew, she stays true to her feelings and she doesn't act like a complete bitch just because Ben is an ass. I also like the fact she aknowledges her jealousy but I hope she does think about the fact he slept with so many girls at least once. But I guess that comes around if they ever get lovey dovey _
The backround story of them is really interesting and I think it's wonderful that you focus the story not only on the romance part but also on the emotional issues they have...i can't really express what I mean, to be honest, but I love the way you describe how both of them deal with their tragedies. I honestly want Ben to kiss her already cause she already likes him...but she knows he tried to kiss her once. Maybe she's just running away again but I hope she can turn around and face Ben someday.
I also have to compliment you for your characters! They are believable and I can feel with them. I especially like her best friends, the Brother, his finacé and the guidance teacher :D Andrew...i'm not sure. I don't really get him.
Btw why did Ben help Andrew to get a date with Page? It was way earlier but i still think about it - could be i simply overread it...
I hope they can make progress!
Sorry the review is so short but I'll try to comment regulary -
Can't wait for more!