aww

very adorable story!

at some points the actions were written in a way that seemed to match the broken english that shiro-chan spoke and i dunt know if it was on purpose or not, but i really liked the effect that it gave out

i really liked it!

good job

I have to say that I love this story! Absolutely love it!

Keep writing luv!

Love

SI

This was sweet. That's all I really have to say about it. You could have developed the thing with Katie's mother being concerned a bit further, but overall it was nice.

Much love,

Aero

This is a really cute and heart-warming little story and I enjoyed it. I am really looking forward to what the characters have in store in the future! n_n

Oh, I love this story so much! Mei is so adorable and I liked the insight into her world. Am really looking forward to what happen next...I hope nothing too bad is headed there way. *nervous smile* Guess I'll see. Awesome work as usual!

I'm really enjoying this story so far. Mei-chan kawaii desu ne? And I love Keith and Toshiro, they just need to let the truth out now! *gr* lol I can't wait to see what happens next, looking forward to the next chapter! Arigatou gozaimasu *bows* _

I liked the story, but the formatting made it hard to read. You should go back and double space. It makes it much easier on the eyes.