Reviews for Demonic Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It was ok |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww it was so cute! I really liked it! Your writing could get some improvement, but it was nice c: Easy to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The tunic you were talking about is named "Yukata". c: Oh and I like it so far I'm gonna keep reading! P.D: I LOVE HALF HUMAN/ANIMAL BOYS! OSDIHFOSDHFG 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() A tunic is a knee high peice of fabric that goes over the shoulders that the men of midevil times wore. It doesn't really has sides or sleeves. The color and quality of a tunic was dictated by social status. A man working in a quarry would have more then likely a undyed cotten or wool tunic. While a noble would have dyed, well spun fabric, possibly with trim. i hope this helped |
![]() ![]() Make a sequel! Haha, I know this is a bit too late, but I loved your story! I hope you write an epilogue, or some sort of short drabble about their future :P. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! Though Aden seemed too much like a girl at times... but who cares . I especially liked Aden's mom telling his dad to shut up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute cute story here. My favourite part has gotta be the soap scene when Aden asks Namir "are you purring?" So adorable lol xD. |
![]() ![]() ![]() how sweet. They're living with each other and it's just adorable. I wonder what will happen next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sounds good so far. It's complete so an added bonus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The end... Me like! |
![]() ![]() liked it? I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so awesome! I'm loving where this story is going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy ending! Great! Wonderful story! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww it's over. T_T The ending was cute. They wonn. yayy! Start writing your other story soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet. _ Namir and Aden that is. Aden's parents suck. Please update! |