|Reviews for Breath and Touch|
| Elegant Raven chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
I enjoyed this poem. It's different from what I'm used to, but I like it. It's more or less, trying to understanding a feeling other than a story.
| nine iron chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
Wonderful short poems (shorter than many I have read today) I am very jelous of the review amounts, I cannot seem to get that many at all. Even when I was at my best I still fell short of these numbers.
Keep up the great work, I am off to read more!
Thanks for the review and good luck with all your works
| aknightsgoldenrose chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
Once again your writing blows me away. :)
| KonekOniko chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
Beautifully written; I like the title of this piece. Good job
| Korashio chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
This was good. I liked _
| Mettermi A Dormire chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Wow, this is really deep. It makes me think of a cold,winter night with a fireplace but no fire. A coffee mug but no coffee or cocoa. Blankets all around, but locked away.
| White is a Sin chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
that was really nice. I liked it alot. sweet in a way
| NO LONGER USING chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
I loved this, the tone of it, the wording...imacualate
| Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Ohh, this is so beautiful, and sad. Very toughing and romantic. I especially like the images you use at important passages, such as the "vanishing like mist".
| InspirASIAN chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
Exquisitely written. Beautiful.
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
You write the word so it feels like a sigh. Very nice.
| whitecap-walker chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
sad but beautiful. i like the transitions in this poem. i also like the use of mist and fog. keep it up.
| Black and White Dreams chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
oh... Beautiful job... I like he line
"(you were breathing, against my ear)"
the imagery was great. Nice job.
| Needa S chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
Beautiful! Keep up the awesome work.
| odanion chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
I liked it, it was nice to read. I don't read alot of poems so it was great that it wasn't very complicated...I liked the overall feel that I got from reading it aswell