Reviews for Where
average.snarker chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Rarely do I stumble across a rhyme scheme I enjoy, yet you have done so. There is not much else to say, for I am stunned to find someone who understands stressed and unstressed sylables.

Cynically Yours,


The Furtive Oubliette
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
I love that last line! I love it. I love it. I love it.

And I rather like the rest of the poem. Good work!

~Hazellin (formerly Isabella May)
Universal Empire chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
I liked the flow of thie piece. Nice use of imagery too! Nicely written!
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
i liked the rhymes... very good really... all in all i thought this was wonderful... keep writing
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
this was really good... and yes I am reading all of your poems and going to review because I like your poems... heehee
kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
Excellent. I like the flow of this poem. Not the topic of course, but the flow of the words is great.