Reviews for The look of My World
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Nice and angsty. I like it.

Is there a typo somewhere in the line "I wish now to never had to see"? It doesn't seem to make sense.

I suggest changing "it'll always stay" to "That it will always stay" to make the rhythm flow better.

Still, good work.

:Isabella-May:
Universal Empire chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
Very emotional piece! I liked this one. Well done!
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
same here...
kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
Good expression of emotions.
Amalia Jagd chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
aw sad ending. if u ever edit this and make it longer, let me know! :)