|Reviews for The look of My World|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Nice and angsty. I like it.
Is there a typo somewhere in the line "I wish now to never had to see"? It doesn't seem to make sense.
I suggest changing "it'll always stay" to "That it will always stay" to make the rhythm flow better.
Still, good work.
| Universal Empire chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
Very emotional piece! I liked this one. Well done!
| bR0k3N chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
| kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
Good expression of emotions.
| Amalia Jagd chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
aw sad ending. if u ever edit this and make it longer, let me know! :)