Reviews for Mine
DobbyLove chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Whoa. I love this, it's awesome. :]
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
"I write of depression,

Sadness and death,

Some of you laugh,

While others seek me help."

Yeah, that's basically why I haven't told my family about my fictionpress site. Anyway, good poem.

But I hope you don't truly wish to have never been born.

Hazellin
Universal Empire chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
Nice flow throughout the whole thing. I liked it.
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
thats sad...
kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
Good writing but I don't like this one. I hate the ending.
Amalia Jagd chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
seriously, you contain emotions within your poems. theres only one thing that bother me about this poem.. and some others you write also, is that you'll skip a line every once in a little bit in your poem. i think it would be better to keep it all together as one long poem.