|Reviews for Light|
| Nemonus chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Nice. I really like the unique point of view, the motive, of this one. It's an interesting thought. The only line I really don't like is "In the light everyone is mean"; 'mean' sounds rather immature. I do realize, though, that you had to use it to rhyme. I like the visual descriptions of "The gentle glow of a candle and snow".
| Magical Rainflier chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
I like this. It shows a lot of emotions with every line
| starlight 507 chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
WOW! this is brilliant!
| Universal Empire chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
In the darkness everything becomes clearer than daylight. Nicely written!
| kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
Well written. I like this. Very true.
| Not Quite Dry Eyed chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
I like the idea of this poem and the message you are trying to send but, I don't think the rhyming works quite right for it...it seems forced...but the poem is still good i just think it could use a little work...Keep writing forever and always