Reviews for Light
Nemonus chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Nice. I really like the unique point of view, the motive, of this one. It's an interesting thought. The only line I really don't like is "In the light everyone is mean"; 'mean' sounds rather immature. I do realize, though, that you had to use it to rhyme. I like the visual descriptions of "The gentle glow of a candle and snow".
Magical Rainflier chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
I like this. It shows a lot of emotions with every line
starlight 507 chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
WOW! this is brilliant!
Universal Empire chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
In the darkness everything becomes clearer than daylight. Nicely written!
kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
Well written. I like this. Very true.
Not Quite Dry Eyed chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
I like the idea of this poem and the message you are trying to send but, I don't think the rhyming works quite right for seems forced...but the poem is still good i just think it could use a little work...Keep writing forever and always