This was a really delightful story! I loved the twists you added to already known stories. The writing was fantastic, and wonderfully humorous. It reminded me a lot of Neil Gaiman and Terry Pratchett's 'Good Omens'. Can't wait to begin reading the sequels, and I'd love to buy the paperback version with illustrations and the comic, if that is available that is... umm, that's all. Really great story, thanks for keeping me entertained, lol.

The phantom she rented it out to the phantom from the phantom of the opera?

Cute beautifully crafted story. I love it. You guys did an amazing job.

I just wanted to mention that Schizophrenia, contrary to popular thought, is not a split personality disorder. It involves an inability to differentiate fantasy from reality-often paired with intense paranoia. People who wear tinfoil caps to keep beings from reading their minds are schizophrenic. The Queen is-presumably-not. ...Meh, sorry to come across preachy, but it's a sore point. ~xanthofile

Oh how I love you Ironic Overpowers! (*bows)

yes its WOLF!

that was fabulous and btw I ship Wicked and Briar because I am a totaly freak :)

Oh Red you idiot how long is it going to take you to realize that Wolf is your one true love not that stupid Fourteen!

I was so worried that Cinder's story was going to stop on the last chapeter -is happy-

oh, but I wanted Cinder to end up with Will -pouts- he better gr

hahaha I so knew Briar was a dude!

I think Wolf is a closet sweetie and sense I love S&M it makes him all the better!

I'm glad Wolf made an appearance. I enjoy him greatly.

very interesting. i like the premise. it's very well written.

for some reason i can't stop picturing Red as bill kaulitz from tokio hotel. lol!

onto the next chapter...

I absolutely love this story! It's really imaginative, and all the fairy tales and other stories fit together so nicely. I've been reading all night and can't wait to finish. I had to review after that Final Fantasy reference, though.