Wow, that was pretty good. Very deep, I liked it. I can tell you've spent a lot of time on it, and you should be proud. Very, very good. It could be even better if you bolded some of the words, to give them more power. I wonder what, or who, it was written about. Pretty dark, which is what I always look for in poetry. Once again, great job, and happy writing,

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P.S - The last stanza was my absolute favourite, very powerful.