|Reviews for Your Perfect Barbie Doll Girl|
| sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
I’m going through and reviewing some of the work of the people who have listed me as a favorite author, as a small way of saying thank you. So here’s your thank-you review!
I really enjoyed reading this piece. I liked everything from the formatting to the diction. Your description of these “Barbie doll girls” was vivid and emotional. I could almost feel your resentment and irritation. Overall, I think you did an excellent job with this poem. Keep up the good work!
| Lemon Sorbet chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
I really liked this and can totally relate... Keep it up! Lemonsausagex
| apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
So fucking true. You know, we all know people like that && sooner or later, they are ALL going to get on our nerves.
This was great, I enjoyed reading every little bit of it, every time I read it until I finally stopped at 8 times. XD
"&& I'm almost sorry I'm not her" is a great line, because a TON of people feel like they want to be flawless, made out of plasitc, but all in all it's just better to be ourselves.
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."
| Sandy chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
Don't you know that they broke Ken and Barbie up? LOL. Nice poem.
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
haha I agree. I don't get why people are like this all the time. I'm glad I found a girl who really loves me for who I am. great work on this by the way
| readme chapter 1 . 6/20/2006
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
I love this.. such a great message.. i totally agree.. love the ending
| queenvixta chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
Great poem! God, I hate people like that and I totally agree with what you say in your author's note! Lucky you that you've actually found one of the decent guys! Great work as always! Vx
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
i really like this poem, because this is something i feel so strongly about. i hate all those bitches, those perfectskinnyblond bitches. . . (and mostly im just jealous) and i love how this is written.
| Musingsofasomebody chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
i like this