Is there another place where I can read the rest of this story? Please respond.

I found this and fell in love with it. I went to read the next chapter and obviously couldn't find it. I'm sorry for what happened to you. People aren't smart enough to think for themselves I guess... I hope i'll get to finish this story some day. It's rare to find truly good stories that keep your attention.

you're story is very well-written.

I really want to know who wins the bet.

would you by any chance pm me it or something so I can read it.

I know that you had plagiarism problems..

so it's up to you whether or not you want to send it to me.

thnxx if you do though (:

oh, the first chapter sounds interesting.

too bad u took the story down. damn plagiarizers to hell!

Loved this, you're a really good writer :)

This stoy is really nice, im sorry people copy them but its good that you dont give up, i hope they mature too, good luck.

GREAT start to the story, intriguing and interesting from the first paragraph, I love Eve's ambition and goals, and I like Julian's cultured style and Eve's cooky mother's sneakiness. I hope more chapters are to come, this seems like it could be a classic favorite for many. Good Luck!

Ah, damn, I really wannted to read this. hehe

I like. Were is the rest?

you should continue it! It's really good and funny.

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Oh, and you should totally write a sequel for him, and including Julian and Eva's adventures as parents!

:) What about Dederick? He needs some loving.

Aloha! El amigo... (and thats wer my spanish talent dies ;)

Loved it all! I loved it even more cos i didn't hav to wait for updates. Hehe. And the fact that I spent all day today pretty much reading it is gana come back and bite me in the but considering I should be studying for my exams in just over 3 weeks. Ah, the sacrifices we make...

Anywho, back to your story. The plot was great, the characters were great. (i know, my words of insight are famous...) The amount of Drederick in there was teasing cos he appeared enough to make you love him but not enough cos your left wanting more. Any yes, i am definately in favour of a sequel and even more in favour of said sequel revolving around a previously mentioned stud. :)

Aww, its so cute that she gets pregnant in the end! (I really hope no-one reads this review before finishing the story cos, sheesh, talk about a spoiler). Getting married in a private aeroplane... now THATS original.

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you know no matter how happy i do feel for Julian&Eve. Dederick's situation is just absolutely heartbreaking! thanks for the fic.