|Reviews for It's Cold Hard Fact|
| ash the arsnist chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
this is very honest
"maybe it's none of my business / but then again / maybe it is. / i mean, after all. / i'm the one you lied to." very raw. simple&&cutting. loved it.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
you have a really distinct style of writing. it's nice.
| Flies chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
Eugh, lies are the hardest things to overcome. I used to lie a lot and now I'm proud to say I don't. I like this poem, how it's fragmented and simplistic, it makes it feel like honest anger and discomfort. Wonderously done.
| randompoetry chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
Wow. Its even painful to read. Start it out with you lied at the beginning and end was a nice touch. Great job.
| dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
i can definitely relate to this. i've had my (ex-)best friend lie to me tons of times before (along with a few broken promises to add to it). it does hurt & i'm sorry.