Reviews for The Flawed and Wingless
faiswingedchronicles chapter 2 . 8/20/2009
interesting you should continue it
Widom chapter 2 . 6/18/2006
Heh. Onid is so funny. :) I feel a bit sorry for him (in a loving, respecting way) that although he proved his family wrong, he got tossed out of hell in the end aanyway. Very sad (or is it a good thing to get rejected from Hell?)While I'm on the subject though, Azriel (damn his cool name!) is a horrible person. Love the siren/banshee comment, however. :)
Skylark's Song chapter 2 . 6/14/2006
I like it so far. Please continue. (The beginning was a little confusing, but...)
Widom chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
Very nice. Good plot beginning, a minimum amount of spelling/grammar mistakes, an interesting way of switching between veiws, and absolutely wonderful characters. I like Illiande too (love their names.)Can't wait to read more. :)
Jack-Dio chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
its very purrty

i did nearly cry

which is kinda sad

but anyway that measn it was very good

x
kazoua chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
I'm surprised I'm the first one to review. This is a good story. Entrancing, more like it. I gotta say, how you constrcuted your sentences, you spaced the words and the phrases to fit in a certain manner was genius. Snaps for you.