Reviews for bleed the memories dry
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 10 . 7/5/2006
This is so sad. That girl has made you think that you did something to her when really it's her who did something to you - that is messed up.
breezy nostrils chapter 10 . 7/3/2006
aw...it's sad because it's like an apologize letter for someone you hurt badly. i don't actually know if this series is true - but you make it realistic. nice work. (adding series to faves)
breezy nostrils chapter 9 . 7/3/2006
your silence is such a deadly weapon - i think silence could kill anyone especially if someone is giving you the silent treatment cause they were mad at you. nice work.
breezy nostrils chapter 8 . 7/3/2006
aw...i think you perfectly address issues with teens nowadays. there's just too much emo cutting poems out there, but i think you make it unique in the sense that you're not trying to get attention, but simply telling it as it is.
breezy nostrils chapter 7 . 7/3/2006
m interesting.
breezy nostrils chapter 6 . 7/3/2006
love the usage of paratheses.
breezy nostrils chapter 5 . 7/3/2006
sad...but i think you effectively conveyed raw emotion in here. nice work.
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 9 . 6/26/2006
'Your silence is such a deadly weapon' - wonderful verse. After chruch today I came back changed...hope it stays that way. Have a good time _
a lonely september chapter 9 . 6/26/2006
this is so painful. you describe things that have happened in peoples' lives so amazingly. with such beautiful and painful words. this is just great. . .
lovelikeamixtape chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
"the smiles tha on faces" that's just a perfect, clever phrase. it really describes it well- like you're comparing a smile on a face to waves breaking on the shore. the whole thing though, all the chapters- really beautiful, so raw & emotional- it makes me hurt even though i'm not in your place. really good work.
by His blood chapter 9 . 6/26/2006
painfulrawbeautiful, as always. i'll miss your writing, but i'm really happy for you that you have this opportunity. i wish you the best of luck and i hope that you can finally find happiness, because you deserve it and you've been suffering far too long. i'll be looking forward to hearing from you and reading your writing when you get back.
Charmed Melody chapter 8 . 6/24/2006
Hey girl, I'm so sorry you went through that and probably still are, this had to be painful but I understand and you probably have heard that before *hugs. I don't really know what to say to help but you know, you can email call or i m if I'm on line any time to talksierra
by His blood chapter 8 . 6/24/2006
i'msosorry. i hate the way you're going through all this pain when you don't deserve any of it at all. she's not worth it, you're an amazing, talented, caring person and if she can't see that the way i can, and the way everyone else on here can, then she's blind. i'm so glad that you have a best friend who's able to support you and make you feel better, because that's what you deserve. not the hell you've been going through for so long. god, i just wish i knew how to make you feel better ... it's great that you're writing this collection, though - it helps so much. i love every single one of these, and this is just as amazing as the rest of them.
a lonely september chapter 8 . 6/24/2006
this is so sad. but you did such a great job with it.
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse chapter 7 . 6/23/2006
The second stanza is really just powerfully sad. How do you do that? Make something so short so strong...
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