|Reviews for Fall Into This|
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
Wow. Now that's a wonderful ending. "heaven unbroken", forgive the fact that I didn't replicate it in my quote, but the formatting is wonderful, and adds to the overall product. From what i've read thus far you have a way of standing outside the emotion and examining it, which is a marvelous trait for a writer not to always get caught up in the feeling and forget to identify it to the reader. Well written and developed.