I still love Maddy's character. She has a lot of depth. That dream is a cool twist. Still lovin' it!

Very good chapter! Now I'm anxious to find out if Ann and Caitlyn had the same dream! This story is great. You put just the right amount of details in here. I feel like I'm reading a book instead of a story on FictionPress. The plot is good...it keeps me interested. If your English isn't that good then I suppose there's not much you can do about spelling and grammar mistakes. I don't know what spell check you have, but I type all my stories in Microsoft word and I have my spell check set to check grammar and a lot of other things also. I've never beta read before, but I would be willing to do it to check for grammar. But keep up the good work...I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for reviewing my story! I appreciate it.I don't usually read stories set in these times but I like your story! I think it's good so far and I like the characters, especially Ann. She seems sweet. I did notice some spelling and grammar errors. If you have spell check you can just use that and it will catch most of it. I always run my stories through spell the story is good...I hope you add the next chapter soon.

I love the descriptions in this story. Everything's so vivid. Maddy seems nice and like a great protagonist. I can't wait to see what happens. And Ann is so sweet! hahah! She's so quiet. I hope they stay close. And Uncle Anthony and his promise... That's the cutest thing I've ever heard of. I wonder how dinner will go. The story is really great. I love all the characters already. I wonder what will happen with Maddy tries to go to school...

I like it and can't wait to read on more. It's very catching and is a story that easily draws you in. That's what makes it so interesting. I also love the way you can really get in touch with the characters and get to know them.

I know that i've seen it before but i do have to say that this is a really good story and i really like it. It has humor, and i really like it because you can really get to know Maddy well. I like it in a story when you can really connect with a character.