Reviews for You're mine
SarahJaneDrkAngl05 chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
great work! very beautifully written.

~SarahJane
Nemonus chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
Aw...*is depressed* This one's cool and heartfelt. The repitition is good, and though the rhythm is not always perfect, that's ok. The only thing that bothered me was the descriptions of the 'hero', which were too typical.
Mosdefanie chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
I can truly relate to the general feeling in the poem of great "yearning" (if you know what I mean).
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
Love this..."You might as well be on a horse in shining armor,/You look so strong as you save the damsels in distress" like a fairytale

The first few lines totally drew me in, and the end left me hanging as well as satisfied.

Great job!
Minerva Gray chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
Excellent, excellent! I greatly enjoyed reading this. It was beautifully written, and it flowed wonderfully. Superb!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
WOW! Heart this! Excellent poem, one of the best I've read today so far! Write on!

~Anna~ _