Reviews for Vanished
Twilight Starr chapter 3 . 11/3/2007
Mysterious vanishing. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 2 . 11/3/2007
That interrogation had to be awkward.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
Great beginning.

This story has potential.

Good luck with writing and this story.

Have a wonderful day. :)

~Twilight Starr~
Adaku chapter 3 . 6/10/2006
I'm speechless right now-so yeah. You did a good work on this chapter. keep updating this story. till next time

waterhealer
DMan7542 chapter 3 . 6/9/2006
Wow your story is very good. I can't wait to find out what happens.
ADSpencer chapter 2 . 6/9/2006
OH, that's creepy, about his car. I like how you added the drug reference and showed how it could be so overplayed by the media. Nice work.
ADSpencer chapter 1 . 6/9/2006
Interesting story of far. I'm very intrigues about Abbas...Nice work.
Adaku chapter 2 . 6/8/2006
oh, chiffhangers, sometimes I hate them and sometimes I don't. It all depends on how good the story is. Well, good work so far. You have great details

waterhealer
Adaku chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
nice work with the first person narritave so far. I like idea it reminds me of a mystery crime movie. kep writing.

waterhealer
yoshi101 chapter 2 . 6/8/2006
Very interesting. It has piqued my intrest to say the least. I'm excited to see what happens with Victoria and Abbas. Good job!
sourgummyworms2007 chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
this is intersting. keep it up. i want to read more. its creepy like. was he aducted by alens or something?
justmica chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
wow, looks good so far. full of suspense and good build up. nice work. :)