Reviews for Vanished |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Mysterious vanishing. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() That interrogation had to be awkward. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great beginning. This story has potential. Good luck with writing and this story. Have a wonderful day. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm speechless right now-so yeah. You did a good work on this chapter. keep updating this story. till next time waterhealer |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow your story is very good. I can't wait to find out what happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH, that's creepy, about his car. I like how you added the drug reference and showed how it could be so overplayed by the media. Nice work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story of far. I'm very intrigues about Abbas...Nice work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, chiffhangers, sometimes I hate them and sometimes I don't. It all depends on how good the story is. Well, good work so far. You have great details waterhealer |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice work with the first person narritave so far. I like idea it reminds me of a mystery crime movie. kep writing. waterhealer |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting. It has piqued my intrest to say the least. I'm excited to see what happens with Victoria and Abbas. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is intersting. keep it up. i want to read more. its creepy like. was he aducted by alens or something? |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, looks good so far. full of suspense and good build up. nice work. :) |