|Reviews for Each Step|
| Ryan Schiff chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
This is the trick to poetry. Don't tell us how you feel. Show us what feelings look like. You say "Its getting harder and harder to follow the rules."
I say:The entropyIn side of meGrows with every strideRiding waves of chaosPulled out by pandamoniums tideEvery moment, harder to get off the ride
| Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
Cool. Nice job on this.
| Tikklz chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
I agree that this is very "simple and effective". It just says what it means to, without trying too hard. Nice.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
Interesting. Well written. Keep it up.
| elvenstorm chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
This is so simple yet effective. Don't know what else to say, this was brilliant. Well done x
| whatshername665 chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
Hmm sounds like you are trying to stretch your wings and possibly find your self? Great peom!