Reviews for the bedspread man
Ferdinands-Savior chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
God, your poetry is just...I don't know- amazing? This one started out sedate and somber and then, bam!, you've got that one line with that one word (of this I watch, ticketless, and amused,)and there's a smile on the reader's face. Brava yet again.

The Postscript chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
Amazing images, especially the line "That swim on the surface of smooth glass". Great work. Also, I love your pen name! Keep writing.