|Reviews for Mute|
| not telling chapter 6 . 7/11/2012
hi i like fornic9 sexhomos k? k
| turkey chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
dis best stroy evar
| fan chapter 6 . 7/11/2012
ur ficshun so gut
| sunny-california chapter 6 . 3/20/2012
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PWEEZE 3
| Esquirella chapter 6 . 8/13/2007
Oh NO! Who knew Jake would end up being such trouble for James?
| The Falconer chapter 2 . 8/11/2007
Wow. That chapter was...intense. Maybe a little TOO intense? The gym teacher, the uncle, the secret organization, the tatoo (I figure it's got something to do with the organization), the self-piercing thing *shudders*, the kiss and now James left his house...to go live with Tristan? Hm, I dunno. I'm not buying it. I think it's a little much to happen in one day. Tristan and James meet, they kiss, Tristan protects James from the evil uncle and they flee together. I hope that next chapter the mob isn't after them...
On to chap. 3...
| The Falconer chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Nice first chapter.
"The Caravilles were the new family on the block with more secrets than most would ever hold. James, the son of the head of a very secret organization, lived with his uncle Jerry for security reasons." That's just a rumor, right?
Something tells me there's history between Jake and Tristan...
On to chap. 2...
| CaFFy chapter 1 . 1/13/2007
| ShadowGal chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
Awesome start to the story. The characters are very interesting so far, and the plot has room to go in several different directions. I'm glad that there are several chapters posted already, as I'm looking forward to reading them! *goes to do just that*
| Leila chapter 5 . 8/6/2006
Hey hey hey, how's my favourite secretly-writing-slash lady? Loving the story so far. Thanks for the condolences, but none needed. I should probably call you, shouldn't I?
| fiona chapter 5 . 8/1/2006
hi, its fiona. your story is really interesting! im going to keep looking for updates.
| WitchGhost chapter 5 . 7/27/2006
I like this story so far and I like the characters to. But why doesn't your mom know your writting this or will you get in trouble?
| chelsea chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
you are an amazing writer.i love this so freaking talented.i love that
| Cherise chapter 4 . 7/24/2006
Wow! That must've been some serious attraction for them to jump each other like that! Not that that's a bad thing. I really like Tristan though. I'm glad he didn't get attached to Jake. He's...off. I just hope Jake isn't abusive as well. Or too forceful.
| Leila chapter 3 . 7/23/2006
w00t for sexy Russian goodness! I really like where you're taking this. Keep it up!