I read your story and I really liked it. I truly appreciate both the story and your talent. I want to work on it and put in the effort as a comic commission artist. I would like to convert it into a comic, and I have some ideas that I would like to share with you. I am Dam sure you will love it!

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Ama

Just another brilliant chapter, you actually have a natural flair for writing :)

I'm quite new to this site and this is the story I had to read when I read the little title thingy ! This is an amazing chapter in a really good, good story. I'm glad you continued :) Thank you for writing this... it's brightened my day actually !

I really hope you keep on writing

I usually stay on the Fanfiction site, but this story caught my eye and I love every bit of it so far. It's beautifully written and had me on the edge of my seat for most of the story. I hope you'll continue it. I'd love to see where it goes :).

Oh, I don't have an account here but if you have an account on fanfiction, you can get a hold of me there if you wish to reply to this review. I'm Fire of Snow :).

Omg I loved the poem could I possibly use it for my instagram. It's a quote page that I'm going to start and I was wondering if I could use the poem. Thanx soooo much.

:) update soon! Nice story. !

omg holy crap tis is great i hope you will update !

haha so much suspense! I like it :)Not many stories include that nowadays :) Good chapter :3

awesome chapter :) You really nailed aira's feelings when rebecca said all that crap. Does aira get back at her in later chapters? jk lol. Anways a very good start and I cant wait to read more :)

I know where that 'The Diner' came from-I think. Those pink dresses that flows to the knees and the skates and even starting from the name, 'The Diner'. I'm guessing it's the one from 'A Cinderella Story' movie with Hilary Duff and the cute Murray guy, right? Oh well, I love reading your story and I'm still catching up so, see you in the future chapters! :)

... Holy crap. You just made me realize that the first time I met my girlfriend, the bells of the clocktower rang.

YAY! im so glad you updated! cant wait for the date XD

Your story is just so…ugh, it's amazing! Update as soon as you can!

If Mr. Page says anything else so sweet and adorable I might spontaniously combust. You know how she had to squeal into her pillow for a minute. Well, I did that multiple times. This took me so long to get through just because of that. I can't wait untill the date chapter comes out. What was James wearing? Oh, and it wasn't too smart of them to meat at a gas station. They have cameras and now there is footage of them kissing. I hope nothing bad comes of that...