Reviews for sliding down the rock face
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
Wow, I love the hurried feel of this piece. Everything feels like it's sliding as the poem goes on. So I suppose I don't really need to say that the flow is wonderful. And I agree that the miss-jointing line is spectacular. Great work. Keep writing! :)
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
the misjointed line makes me smile. the ending is great. kind of a blurry chaos is coming feel
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
This is an exceptional chain of though...the end is foreboding somehow, like a threat or a very evil promise...it's as though the person were falling, and they can't stop themselves...and someone's going to fall down after them...oh well, will stop raving, I like this...Love, Mia