Reviews for Lonely
StaryNight chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
I like where the poem is going, but I just feel like I still want to hear more about maybe why you are lonely or some more details about how it feels to be lonely. I think if you expand it it will be good or put more crucial details.
poemkitten7 chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
Aw, sad yet pretty all the same. Short and simple, I like those. :) Keep writing.