Reviews for Humanity
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
Should it be "lovers are lovers"? Since the next line states "children are children." Otherwise, "lovers and lovers" doesn't make sense.

However, your poem is deeply meaningful. I enjoyed it immensely.
Lucca Ashtear chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
I enjoy the repetition and your use of blank space. But do you really mean "Lovers AND lovers"? Or do you mean "Lovers ARE lovers"? That would make more sense in the poem.
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 6/9/2006
Why do you write 'Lovers and lovers, and children are children' twice?

It doesn't make sense, twice. Don't you mean 'lovers are lovers'?

Other than that, I thought it was a good poem. Be nice to know if i'm right or not!

Keep writing

Alan