|Reviews for DreamSpeak|
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
The subtle rhyme and flow of this is marvelous. It kind of floats and darts along at the same time. Well written.
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
This is good. The *only* line I am unsure of is:
found only in the
But I am not sure I could tell you why. Lovely.
| Mistress of Eternity chapter 1 . 6/9/2006
Beautiful flow. Powerful imagery. Well done.
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 6/9/2006
like the short lines; sort of telling a story but not telling you the entirety of the/a situation
love the ending