Reviews for Error of the New Day
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
We always make mistakes. Good poem. Nice title.

~Twilight Starr~
Written chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
i LOVED the end and the use of question marks. nice poem!
Martin Peterson chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
Again, a good poem. Excellent title, structure, just the right length. Just a small grammatical point: "sun's" - you need the apostrophe because it's possessive.

Nicely done.

Matt
Octello chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
Ah! The angst flows freely. Wonderful poem with great emotion!
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
Pretty good poem. It had a wonderful sad emotion to it.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~