Very well-written! I feel like Abi is a real person, with the way she thinks and all. :)

wow. i really like how this was written :) the flow is really natural and i love abigail's narration. are you still going to continue this? this is a really awesome fic and i got really depressed when I saw that this hasn't been completed yet. i hope you do update someday (please please please i really wish you will) and good luck :)

I agree that Chris felt shoved in at the end of the chapter. Overall, though, it's a really promising start. Different and witty - I like it.

I like the story, but it just seems as if Abigail has a little too much on her plate? And it'd be good if you could develop Tiger- he's my fav character(: Good job, update soon!

you know your title is very ironic, anyways i really like this story so UPDATE!

YAY! I just read your story... I really love it! I hope you update soon, because I am so looking forward to reading the next chapter!

-Sally

Sigh... i love the way you write. It's so perfect, all the right emotions with the right amounts. Not too dramatic not too superficial, just... real. And i love it. It's amazing!

I liked the part in which Abi says Lucy is getting smaller and smaller... and the cancer simile. You're so talented at writing!

And i have to give extra points for originality again!

This is the first story where you can see the difference between accepting someone who is gay and accepting a gay couple.

Now why don't you say that to the slash story writers? xD;

Aww... *heart*

Sweet how it came out not overdramatically but still emotional enough. It kind of catches the right feeling and all, one-sided love... how cute.

I bet Lucy is pregnant. That also would explain the permanent PMS, as Abi once mentioned... even though she can't be permanently pregnant, so my theory kind of crumbles... put it's still the logical thing.

Oh my, i'm loving this! You made me laugh a couple of times with the humour.

I admit i was disappointed when Abi and Timothy ended up in the same class because i thought she might end up with him, the guy her friend likes, and that's just awfully overdone. I was totally relieved when he turned out gay. That was unexpected!

So far you got me hooked!

I'm really enjoying this story! It's obvious that this story isn't just focused around the main romantic relationship, but it's more about the main character. So far I haven't really seen her develop as a person, because personally I don't think there's much point in all this drama happening if she doesn't change through it for the better (possibly for the worst). Please update soon!

Angsty... The Lucy issue was well-explained, but maybe you should have elucidated a little more on the Chris-and-Abi problem :D we would have had some 'relationship' meat to sink our teeth into... And I kind of missed Tiger's charismatic presence in this chapter :(

Nice work and update soon!

*hugs story*

I'm in love.

wow, that's heavy. i'm really enjoying it. i can't wait to read more. so, update soon. [nodnod]