|Reviews for Experiment XYP47: Tomika|
| Typhon Omega-1138 chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
Can you update this please? This is quite an interesting story as it is.
| tom chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
You should update this.
| Noelle chapter 2 . 6/22/2006
I think i have read a story based on this idea before...but i dont remember it. please continue with this story, i REALLY want to see where it goes.
thank you! :)
| puppyrock3 chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
It's a good story, don't get me wrong, but I've never liked sci-fi
Keep writing Nicki
| Muffins-Weasley chapter 2 . 6/16/2006
wow... i thought it was a guy robot when you explaned this story to me... it's kind of biographical... more than 'Run' at least...
| Sam chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
DUDE! that sounds SO cool - you MUST keep writing.
please! i love this kind of writing!
| supplanter-of-tomorrow chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
I like the whole "XYP47" thing. very catchy. "Tomika" kind of reminds me of "Tonka", though. Maybe it's just me, though.
Nice prologue. A pretty overworked idea, but I know it's nigh-impossible to get a new idea. (I've never done it. Have you?) The best stories are ones with old premises in new and exciting ways. Keep that in mind! I love the term "colleges". /That/ is a new idea. Please continue. Will Tomika have trouble fitting in with people? And will she ever find out about her existence as a robot?