Sad chapter, but it was good. I really like Gary )

sh...I'm studying ok..lol well I should be. Oh well! OMG wow..so wait is Daniel Gary's father? that got me a bit confused but I think she was right to torture him like that! update SOON!

( I know I said I wouldnt be reading or reviewing until exams are over but shh..my mom doesn't have to know I'm not studying!) WOW! Interesting line at the end. That was a nice twist. Hmm..I like Gary so far! lol ok I may study, may read..hmm

Love this so far! I have exams this week so until they are over then you won't get another review until thursday at the earliest and I should be studying now but I couldnt keep away! Love this so far! Abosolutely adore this. Interesting that they dug up the diaries...I wonder what mystery of the past they hold!

I like all the twists, it makes the story so much more complicated and complex, but so much more intriguing. Lovely chapter!

OK. I want to make sure I have all of the confusion figured out here. Talia, Melissa and Alicia are best friends. Alicia was murdered. Daniel is Alicia's 40-something year old neighbor who she eventually ens up sleeping with. Gary is Talia's boyfriend. Gary is Daniel's son? Talia was sexually abused by her father? Umm...I think that is everything so far. Anyways...just curious if I have it figured out so far, and I can't wait to read more. I love the format you are writing in, with memories from all the different characters plus diary entries. It helps to get a better idea of everything that is going on instead of just one view point. Not to mention that 10 different people can have 10 different versions of the same event.

great story. please keep going. i love it. :)

The story is going really great. Keep it up )

I like this story a lot ) Nice work!