|Reviews for Wisps of Grey|
| super happy nuclear girl chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Sometimes, poetry is a political statement.
I think this is a beautiful poem. I like the second stanza, it is perfect because it fits and holds so much anguish is such simple words. I think you've done a wonderful job.
You should probably write forever!
| redcommander27 chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
The poem itself is not bad. But if your saying that the people serving our country died for lies I think you are very wrong. I am not for the Iraq war or bush, but saying that our troops died for a lie is just downright wrong. This may not be the most necceasry war around, but at least understand it's not for oil or if this website has forums I might start one about politics. athe poe was good so keep on writing!