Impressive! Good work with the structure. It really seems like I'm in the mind of Alexander while all of this was going on. Like the rest of your work, I really enjoyed it. It's nice to see a side of Mr Wolfgang that isn't slapped around by Ravine half the time.

The theme itself is also quite refreshing. I like how you don't hold anything back with the gore.

Out of 10, I'd give you an 8. Well done!