Reviews for My Wish
thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
Neat piece. Strong, sad... I like it. I can very much relate to it. I kinda ran out of inspiration for reviewing... oops... but, the terrible reviewer strikes again, ne? Eternally uninspired. But meliking this one... very much... v/much. *repeats self* I like! a lot.

Oh how I liking this one. And can relate so much. I wish I had more to say on it.. something actually intelligent...

~Aquila Strife
Shara G chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
I can relate to this. Nice work, I like it.
tamarkaph2006 chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Strong feeling and wishful. You can feel the emptiness, the loneliness in this piece. And the hopelessness as well. Great work!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Good work, well written. Keep it up!

fairEtales chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Nice job. You do realize, though, that you repeated the line(s): "I just need someone to hold me/ Someone to tell me/ "it's going to be all right" I liked your summary. It really got to me. I think that the summary itself could be the poem. Good work.