Love the story ... but..Hm.. this is weird... as in there are heterosexual and homosexual marriages in this story... So why is it that the two guys (Vega and Altarn) have to get married ? Can't they like get married to their opposite sex?

Is it because they were promised before they were born (even before their parents found out their gender) ?

Or because their parents knew they were gay?

Some explanations please.. they might make the story more interesting and convincing...

aww! i feel so bad for Vega. two years without love, i'd be going nuts, why didn they try harder to have kids? doesnt Altarn need them?

more please

Oh wow. You are really an amazing author. I can't even begin to explain what this chapter made me... feel. I could almost feel what they were going through. Great job at capturing the emotion!

Wow. That was really good. I LOVE how you describe things. Thank you for updating and do it again soon!

Oh, wow. This is so good. I love it! Please, please, please *puppy eyes* update!

Well... this is one of the more odder stories... I cannot tell what time period it is set in... something older time but not too much... and obviously fiction because men wernt aranged to marry other men ever... lol... But i like it so far... vega sounds like a cutie!Post next chappie eh?goodjob sofar

~rttm

Very interesting, I like it a lot, you must have really put some thought into this one. Good job. I wish I was good as you. No ones reviewing my stories. I’m a bad writer, but if you could review some of my work it would be a big confidence boost. Our maybe you could tell some people on the site about my work. Summer is also a time of rejoice for ones past. Take time and remember some of the greatness you have experienced as a individual.

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