Reviews for these walls
RainRaven chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
Wow...Your words have captured a lot of emoution in this poem. I doubt I could ever understand what it's exactly about but I still think it's amazing. If you've read my other reviews you'll know how in awe I am with your work. It's amazing how any emoution can be turned into words that give off a special kind of vision to those who read them. Your poetry is really good.
Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
wow... this is so powerful and flows so well. I like the formatting as well. Its hauntingly beautiful, nice work.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
Dark, brutal, honest; it is like the sary-type of truth that you don't want said.

Its pretty and hard to read and amazing, all at once (which is, frankly, amazing).


~* Noelle
Mimi-pt chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
I really liked this poem. It's so direct and powerful. It really got me into your feelings. Keep up the good work.
dustytiger chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
*shudder* this is dark, but very well written, i really liked it, thank you for sharing