Reviews for The Hero
Needa S chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
My hero shines through His spirit. Great ending. Awesome job! Write on and thanks for the kind review.
thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
This is really good. Something I've thought about before. The repetition is effective in driving home the point, the question, the uncertainty (we're supposed to do this in English. Saying whether something's effective and why. But I do it better in casual reviews... -.-;).

And the summing up at the end... yeah. I liking it much.

Aquila Strife (and that 'Strifee' on the other rev was a typo. Ugh.)
mmmmmmmm chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
I like this. The repitition and simplicity of this helps you concentrate on the meaning more. Great writing!
steinbock chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
or all three? lol, great job! i really liked the piece. the repitition really let you focus on the meaning. this is an amazing piece, keep writing!
Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
wow, you know ive been tossing ideas about what a hero is in my head for a while in hopes of writing an essay but I don't think that i could ever match this poem. very well done.

Kira