Reviews for S'il Vous Plait
Eve Amare chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
The true reasons for this peom being written are left nowhere else but your heart, and therefore, my own has some trouble seeing what yours does. I see the rejection, I see the love, and I see the confusion within yourself [or the person of object in this]. I can't say that I like this, or I enjoyed reading this, for honestly, I didn;t. The rejection and the love came too close to represening my own life for any type of comfort. But this is a good piece, very good. It's simple and if lets the mind and heart of the reader wander within carfully placed lines that keep them on track. Good work.

As Always,

Eve
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
I like the simplicity and the honest emotion in this. The subtle description is sometimes more overpowering than the overly descriptive. Good work.