|Reviews for S'il Vous Plait|
| Eve Amare chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
The true reasons for this peom being written are left nowhere else but your heart, and therefore, my own has some trouble seeing what yours does. I see the rejection, I see the love, and I see the confusion within yourself [or the person of object in this]. I can't say that I like this, or I enjoyed reading this, for honestly, I didn;t. The rejection and the love came too close to represening my own life for any type of comfort. But this is a good piece, very good. It's simple and if lets the mind and heart of the reader wander within carfully placed lines that keep them on track. Good work.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
I like the simplicity and the honest emotion in this. The subtle description is sometimes more overpowering than the overly descriptive. Good work.