Reviews for A Fine Line
the.beat.of.my.heart chapter 2 . 12/8/2006
oh interesting! Stephan seems really hot. keep writing!
rose chapter 2 . 10/17/2006
hi.. your story is really well written but she's fifteen and he's twenty two. that's a huge age difference so maybe you could bump it up. but i love the characters and story line. UPDATE SOON.

-rose
addicted2storiz chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
I really love this story. It's pretty awesome and different. However, even though I don't normally make demands except for updates, could you maybe up Mia's age to 17 or something please? Since Stephan's probably around 22, 6 years apart seems too much since I'm guessing there's going to something happening between Mia and him. I could be wrong; this is your story, so you can just ignore me if you want. Don't be offended. I just think a rebellious 17 yr old would have enough independence to barge into an office meeting. but... never mind. I'm complaining. But I'm happy with the story nevertheless.
the.beat.of.my.heart chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
This is a really good story. keep writing.
virgo-valentina chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
This story is awsome! Pls update! please!~!i love stephen and mia!
Rayne Aubrey chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
I love it Chuchi. lol She reminds me off. Off her rocker and totally flipping mad. lol Love ya!
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