|Reviews for To Whom I would be|
| Charley Keed chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
I adore your work. It speaks from your soul which is, in this world, a rarity. The true blessing of this site is that as the reader, one can find the shades of this world evolve through stories and essays written by the writers who should and may congregate to preserve how they feel mankind should prosper and how, they are certain, humanity has failed.
In this poem you show us love, but on a deeper level you show how mortality not only defines us, but binds us to our wishing for change or for something else.
You have a gift with wordplay and it shines in achievements like this. Very reflective, as all your work is, and very enjoyable to read.
| lordelfy chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
wow such a great new way of looking at things!