Reviews for Janie and the Cretin
Victoria chapter 20 . 11/8/2006
Just wanted to say I love your story, I just sat down and read all of what you have so far in about an hour. Nice job, Im very picky about what I like and your story captured my attention. Nice work, keep it up. :D
Lene-pooh chapter 20 . 11/8/2006
i love it...finally janie and mike are together... i love the creamy and gavin scenes it's so funny i love it lol well it's the end and let me just say it's the best story i've read on FP keep on writing and i'll keep on reviewing lol ONLY THE EPILOGUE left (... are you thinking of putting a sequel to this story or no well i'll keep me eyes open and i'll keep on reviewing your stuff much
chupchups chapter 20 . 11/8/2006
aw. is this really the end? *sniff sniff* that last scene with gavin and creamy is pretty funy what i'm sad though is that there were no lip actions, no anthing! i was pretty surprised when lala popped up. i was like hey! who's this random character, then i remembered and was like oh, nice tying a few stray ends. i'm happy that they're happy and back together, although i still don't get mike's reasoning for being extremely melodramatically pissed. it's a good idea to write a non related story before thinking of going into a sequel. whatever you choose to do, may the inspiration be with you _
Julia2Cj chapter 20 . 11/8/2006
I can't believe this story's almost done! :( I'm going to miss it... *preemptive sniffle*
elohimdancer319 chapter 20 . 11/8/2006
Wonderful story. Can't wait for the epilogue. You really did an amazing job.
Saraestla chapter 20 . 11/8/2006

(I know you plan to have the epilogue taking place at the prom) but it will be so cute to have them marry with Natalie and Johnny being teenagers, fighting or something like that and it will be like history is repeating itself all over again

ps: Anyway, could you read and review my story plz? It would be great
HarleyPink20 chapter 20 . 11/8/2006
Oh yeah, she definitely made the right decision! ;) I'm glad things are okay with Janie and Mike. Now I want to know what will happen next. So PLEASE update as soon as you can! (flutters eyelashes)hehe:) Great chapter, btw!
angels and effects chapter 20 . 11/8/2006
Everyone: aww! They finally get together! Seriously, this was hilarous, especially the Creamy and Gavin thing. Haha, protecting his manhood would be a better idea... Creamy's just so funny. Maybe that's why he's GAY, you know, both in the homosexual and happy way. ROFL, lame I know... it's sweet the way Mike's willing to let Janie go to UCLA if that's what she wants, even if she won't be with him like he's always wanted in NYU. That's what I call true love :) well, the only thing I'm a little skeptical about is how fast Mike changed his attitude towards Janie and became more... er, civil? The taking off his shirt thing and all. I don't disapprove of it but I just thought it was a little fast. Maybe it's just me...

Epilogue left! I'm glad she made the decision to go to NYU, even though it was kind of expected. Yup, can't wait for the LAST chapter, update soon!
Alenor chapter 20 . 11/8/2006
lol, creamy is funny, a gavin took the bait so creamy keeps baiting him, it's great. and i'm glad that mike stopped being stubborn. i can't wait for the epilogue to see what you've done ~ Alenor.
Ophelia chapter 19 . 11/5/2006
Fantastic story! You are however, evil for ending the chapter like that. Cruel I tell you. Cruel! Poor Janie. So sad. Please update soon.
chic rebel chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
its been a couple weeks now, i was wondering when you were planning on updating. :D
AshPen chapter 19 . 11/2/2006
where's my update? lol. kiddin!
funsize chapter 19 . 10/27/2006
heckle... heckle heckle heckle... i want a new chapter and I want it NOW! please... pretty please... see now u'v made me lower myself to begging, thats how bad i want it

HarleyPink20 chapter 19 . 10/23/2006
Great chapter! I really hope Janie makes the right decision and go to him. I'm crying with her right now. ;) Please update soon as you can. I really like your story!:)
LadyWriter chapter 19 . 10/19/2006
This is an amazing story. I love the chapters and everything about it from the emotion to the characters. Great job! :-)
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