Reviews for Janie and the Cretin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Woo hoo! Creamy's back. Albeit only over the phone, but still, he's back. And I love him. Meanwhile, what the crap about Mike renting out the room? Okay, so yeah, I kinda saw it coming what with the way they had not said goodbye and all, but you definitely released that information to maximum effect. They better work this out. BTW, total hilarious mental image now of Creamy and Peaches teaming up together to get Mike and Janie back together. Do you realize as a team they'd be Peaches and Cream? LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what do you mean he's renting out the room? you cant leave it at that update like tomorrow. hahha, please though update soon i cant stand the wait! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg omg please post soon i want to kno what happens? is janie goin to ny and patch things up with mike or no please update soon i'm dying here lol well update soon and i'll read and review asap P Much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Didn't want to cry til the last part about him renting out the room. |
![]() ![]() Did I mention I am DYING! DYING! DYING! to know what the heck they both wrote in that friggin' diary? Later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nonononononononono you can't do this! I'm gonna cry... Oh no oh no oh no... poor poor janie. Isn't Mike being mean, god it's an accompishment for her right? Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha Ha I love it, what a cliff hanger into the last chapter. I absolutely love this story and i want a sequal. I hope Janie goes to nyu and kicks his ass! |
![]() ![]() Hey, haven't been on fp for a while. Creamy is so aw. i so want to meet a real-life Creamy. Ok, so the story is still going on, almost done, and it hasn't lost its luster (i missed 2 chapter updates). i just don't understand mike's reaction. that's my only dumbfoundedness. i can't wait to for the end. got any ideas for the main characters in the sequel or is it still mike and janie? anyways, may the inspiration be with you _. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, I won't bitch. I knew you were going to fix it. And I must say, my love and adoration for the rugrats has just tenfolded. |
![]() ![]() ![]() SHE GOT IN! And crap, call that a cliffhanger... why does he have to rent out the room? Do something, Janie! Go back and claim that room! Haha, I think Creamy'll be a very funny person to meet in real life. He sounds pretty wacko, which is just my type of person. Oh, and thanks for reviewing my story. I'll update it soon, don't worry :D update soon too! One more chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() MGNEH! I was expecting something like that would happen...Good lord I really need that hanky now. No, it's not so I can blow my snot into it. It's so I can strangle you with it! GARGH! Or maybe Mike...yea Mike...GET READY TO DIE YOU! Ok. I'm done over reacting but GAH I still feel like killing something/someone. CREAMY! I love Creamy. Yes, I do. I love Creamy. How 'bout you? XD I'll shut up now... G-R-E-A-T update! |
![]() ![]() Please update really really soon! Pretty please... don't leave your readers hanging like this! I can't wait to see the next chap... But I hope you will make Mike grovel a bit... for being a bit of an ass... Janie took the exams when they haven't patched things up yet, so he should have tried understanding her feelings... |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO WAY! she has to talk to him, she can't let him rent out the room! argh, she had so better travel to new york and tell him she's going to NYU otherwise i will...dislike the story? ok that didn't really have the affect i wanted it to because you can't exactly say you're gonna yell at character in a story so yeah...ahh well, it's a great chappie but i really hope you get them sorted out, can't wait for more ~ Alenor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I'm having exams right now and my Chem notes are all around me, but God! This story's FABULOUS! I really liked the 'How to kill a mocking best friend' thing, great pun on the book title there. They're making the students below my level in school read it, so yeah. Natalie and Johnny are so cute! Though you've been spelling Johnny as Jhonny a lot, but i guess that's just a slip of the typing fingers. Mike was so sweet with what he wrote in the new black notebook! This chapter was too sad... but I just feel like Mike's overreacting. Sure, Janie might have applied for UCLA, but that doesn't mean that she's going to go there. With what happened when they were at NYU, if I were Mike, I'd believe that she applied for NYU and didn't screw up the admission test. But to a certain extent, yeah, I can somehow understand his feelings. Hey, anyone who has liked someone for THAT long's gotta feel that. They'd better get back together soon! You know what you have to do, haha... |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god...that seriously had me crying. thats so evil! YOU ARE EVIL! aw...HE IS EVIL! grr...and still i love it all the same! i love this story! ignore my last outburst! lol! POST THE LAST 2 CHAPS AND THE EPILOGUE UP SOON PLEASE! |