Reviews for Janie and the Cretin |
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![]() ![]() no. you can't just leave it there. **prods** update update update updatte **pokes more** lol. .. but yes. please do update ._. oh, and great work on this chap P |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh no. no no no no no. NO! bawling my eyes out here! HOW COULD U DO THIS TO ME-E-E-E-E! NON NO NO! i swear, if something sweet does not happen within the next chapter, i will drop a jeyboard on my head and DIE. i will kill myself. (i'm sorry i may be over reacting but U CAN NOT DO THIS TO ME!) xoxo.p.s. i loved the start it was cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOODNESS! U have to hurry with the next one.. i can't wait to read it |
![]() ![]() wait wait wait wait wait a second. Janie and Mike finally get together, they finally start acting like a couple, Mike sits though "the talk" with Janie's Dad...and then all b/c of an acceptance letter from UCLA/the fact that she hasn't heard from NYU yet he gives back the diary and gives up on her? WHAT? Just like that? He doesn't still think she's still actually wants to go to UCLA? I thought that after the trip it pretty obvious that she still loves NYU. Something just doesn't make sense here... |
![]() ![]() oh man! Mike returned the diary..( i'm really excited about how this is gonna end.. update soon.. and yes, the monsters are so funny and cute.. wish i have next-door kids like them.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I want Janie to go to NYU so bad because I want her and Mike to be together. I hope she does get accepted. They are so good together! :) Please update soon!:) |
![]() ![]() nice one.. left me wanting to read the next chapter, like, RIGHT N.O.W.! :) well...i'll be waiting for it (or them), hope it'll be soon. ta ta |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG i cant believe that just happened! oh i hope u update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() no way! he can't just leave like that! that's awful. i really hope that they sort things out and end up together because otherwise i'll be sad :( lol. i mean, he went through the father talk and everything and he's just giving up? idiot if you ask me. i can't wait for more though ~ Alenor. |
![]() ![]() GAH ...GAH ...GAH is all i have to say please update soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am a reveiwer, hear me whine! Don't leave them like that! I dearly hope you're not a (big) fan of sad endings, even though this isn't a ending, it sounds so, so...endish! Well, not a true ending, but I hope you do get the point. Even though you didnt use very many words to describe Janie's feelings, it's displays her emotions deeply. I like you're writing style though. Its refreshing to not have to read large paragraphs where I (very onften) lose my spot in them. I really don't know what else to say though, I'm not very good at complimenting people, and you're is very good. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what! they just got together, man, oh man update soon. r u going to write a sequel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate it when I know from the chapter title that it's going to be sad, but you have to read it anyway... and then it is... Hurry up with the rest and fix it! :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! NO! How can you do that? Oh he can't go, and I can't believe he gave back the book! Oh you have to update this so quickly! You cannot leave me waiting for long! Anywho I loved the chapter! Although please let he go to NYU please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG no don't let mike go lol it was so cute how the parents foudd out about janie and mike from the kids that was the best what's goin to happen to mike and janie now i hope mike still loves janie and i hope janie loves mike cause they make a cute couple update soon and i'll read and review asap lol |