|Reviews for Janie and the Cretin|
| Jovanna chapter 18 . 9/30/2006
| Lena Niccolas chapter 17 . 9/30/2006
oay so I just finished reading. this story is really really good. I love Janie. And mike. And both the kids. They're definetely cute. Maybe you should do a story about them when they grow up. Or maybe not. I don't know, just update this one soon!
| meeaz chapter 18 . 9/30/2006
I've missed the last chapters or so, so I'm so happy to have caught up.
The two little rugrats are just the cutest things in the world! Intentions, how cute!
And the new chapter, I am holding on to the hope that all will be well, so I refuse to bitch about it :).
| euphorictragedy chapter 18 . 9/30/2006
I don't know what to say, except that I'm sad cuz they had a fight and he returned her journal. It's just... sad.
| Lena Niccolas chapter 8 . 9/30/2006
this storys awesome, I'm not done reading it yet, but i plan on. updates soon!
| Someone Out There Cares chapter 18 . 9/30/2006
I loved this chapter. I feel so bad for Mike, especially if Janie doesn't get into NYU. And he was too sweet to give her back the notebook. This chapter was also really funny, I was sitting there reading, and cracking up.
Aww, thank you for the little note at the end, I really appreciate it. It means a lot to me that my words have some affect on people. It's the least I can do. Thank you again!
| risingofthebluesun chapter 18 . 9/30/2006
OMG! No! How could you?
Aww...I'm so heartbroken right now *tear*tear* You had better update soon other wise the police will come knocking at your door to tell you I've died and you murdered me! Please!
The last chapter didn't "suck". It wasn't the best but it didn't "suck" or anything like that.
| jukeboxsabotage chapter 17 . 9/27/2006
AHAAHHAHAHAHAH;; omg i laughed at this last part. hilarious. i love jhonny. seriously. and everyone should have a Mike in their lives. it'd make everyone happy. yeah. anyhows. you're doing a great job with this;; it's mostly just fun with dialogue and stuff, but for light reading, it's good stuff. keep it up! oh and
| punkturnedwriter chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
Hahaha I love the plot and the first chapter is cool. I still have 15 more to read though. The teletubby name...lol. The head cheerleader is annoying...the way you described her way funny!
| cLauDiFooTaH chapter 16 . 9/22/2006
i haven't had the chance to read with all the new cities added to our loads [you know what i mean hehehehe] anyway, i liked the ending, looks like we're in for a few laughs again now that the monsters are back in action..Ü
| pinkfluffyoranges chapter 17 . 9/21/2006
This is was seriously kick ass story! I can't put into words how much im enjoying reading this, your one hell of a writer. I hope to read the next chapter soon, I'll most certianly be eagerly awaiting it. keep up the terrific work!
| funsize chapter 17 . 9/20/2006
lol i like it... but i've read this like ten times and im STILL WAITING for the next chapter... so PULL UP A SWIRLY CHAIR AND START TAPPING AT THAT KEYBOARD CARALENE
| Raging Libra chapter 17 . 9/17/2006
Those kids are just too cute!
| Someone Out There Cares chapter 17 . 9/16/2006
Aw, the little monster's are so sweet..and funny too. What a wierd and funny moment.
| euphorictragedy chapter 17 . 9/15/2006
I love this story! Absolutely adore it. Please update soon. I know you're going through stuff so just take your time and make good chapters!