Reviews for Janie and the Cretin
Jovanna chapter 17 . 9/15/2006
yaay new chapter soon please :)
Lene-pooh chapter 17 . 9/15/2006
omg i love it i like the cheer routine for the girls and i love janie and mike they're so cute lol the perfect couple lol and the monsters, the perfect parents lmao i love the chapter keep on writing i want to kno what happens to janie and mike later on much
pinkfairydust chapter 17 . 9/15/2006
oh my god! thats so funny! natalie is SO cute i love her to bits! she reminds me of MY little sister! i love this story!
funsize chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
chic rebel chapter 17 . 9/14/2006
your welcome for the title. lol. haha, "so what are your intentions?" jersey girls. :D, hilarious! mike and janie are so cute. hm...i feel like sean and peaches are going to get together. wonderful job, update soon!
HarleyPink20 chapter 17 . 9/14/2006
Great story! I love it! It's so cool and funny. I like Janie and her crazy antics. I hope things go well with Janie and Mike. Please update soon!:)
51 chapter 17 . 9/14/2006
lol, the last scene with the kids is cute. I think I had a dream last night that involved some of the plot from your story, and this was before I knew you had updated. Very strange.
pfeiffer chapter 17 . 9/14/2006

this is funny!

now please explain further on the diary and what mike did with it...oh and the prom as well...and more mishief with the 2 adorable monsters...

elisefey chapter 17 . 9/14/2006
LOL! I'd just like to see the Cretin explain himself to a little girl like Natalie. Good luck to him!
Mrdarcylover chapter 17 . 9/14/2006
I thought this chapter was great! I loved the dancing bit I thought that was funny. The end line was good to, that's the kind of thing I would of done when I was younger to, but I had the tendency to go up to strange men in pubs to (I don't now of course), and talk to them about anything. Okay you probably didn't want to know that. Well anyway I hope you update soon!
chupchups chapter 17 . 9/14/2006
I love your last sentences! they may be cliffhangers but hey are such funny punchlines. i can't believe natalie said that. seriously though. it was a nice and easy to read chapter. i like it. do i smell rmance in he air for sean and peaches? anyways, have a good day, may the inspiration be with you
risingofthebluesun chapter 17 . 9/14/2006
Nah *shudder* matanda...e...

Haha I love Natalie. "What are your intentions?" Do you happen to have that girl on sale? And I'd like to buy Peaches too...the version where you poke her stomach and she squeals! LOL.

I'm not getting a strong feel for this chapter though. I think there weren't enough details. I was looking forward to more reactions and such. Sorry.

But hey, I still love your story! Always.
Alenor chapter 17 . 9/14/2006
that was GREAT! it wasn't mediocre at all so you have nothing to worry about. lol, very amusing too :) hehe, i love that bit at the end with 'the monsters', it was a nice touch. cya later ~ Alenor.
Julia2Cj chapter 17 . 9/14/2006
Yay! Good chapter, esp. the ending. :) But I'm a bit confused about chronology: how long has elapsed since the end of the last chapter, and in between the beginning and end of this chapter?
confusedpyroangel chapter 16 . 9/7/2006
PLease add soon! This is so good!
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