Reviews for Janie and the Cretin
Lene-pooh chapter 16 . 9/5/2006
omg that's so cute how mike and janie are finally together i love the pendent idea it was so cute i wish a guy would do that for me lol i can't wait to read about janie's cheerleading lol well u kno the drill keep on writing and i'll keep on reviewing lol much
alicia chapter 16 . 9/4/2006
l0lz ur story craks me upp..janie a cheerleader never saw that coming l0lz keep it up
Alenor chapter 16 . 9/4/2006
heya, this was a wonderful chappie. lol, they're making her a cheerleader! hahahahaha. anyway, that's great i think it'll be amusing, and i can't wait to see what you do about the prom and whether you end up writing it or not ~ Alenor.
Julia2Cj chapter 16 . 9/4/2006
Yay, happy! So cute. :) But now I really want to know what he wrote in the diary...
elisefey chapter 16 . 9/4/2006
It's not just you, the site really was up and down the last couple days.
Someone Out There Cares chapter 16 . 9/4/2006
I'm loving your story. Mite is such a sweetie. Janie can be so blind sometimes thinking that Mike just wanted to be kissing buddies, I mean c'mon he kept her diary and wrote those things in her new one. Please keep writing!
chupchups chapter 16 . 9/4/2006
Aw. I like the title of this chapter. It's SO cute. Alright, let's see Janie shake her bootie for her guy. Or not. But i really liked this chapter, one of your cute ones, probably because they are now officially a couple. I like how together you can put the characters and how you show that not all cheerleaders are evil. Peaches is cute in a lil sister kind of way. Let's hope she gets together with Sean. May the inspiration be with you .
cLauDiFooTaH chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
hm.. now that they're "on" i'd want to see a few more chapters, w/ conflicts and more of the monsters. it's up to u if u wanna write about the prom but i like it that they hooked up not on the prom night itself. that thing is so "over-used" hehehe just write and i'll read, BASTA!
chic rebel chapter 16 . 9/4/2006
they're together! so happy. haha, i cant wait until the next chapter janie being the replacement cheerleader. :P
Mrdarcylover chapter 16 . 9/4/2006
This chapter was great, I hope you update soon!
Angel of Ink chapter 16 . 9/4/2006
yes! haha. they're finally together...what was katie terrorizing the cretin about, though?man I love that name. : D the cretin...

excellent chapter. : )
Callisto Jean chapter 16 . 9/4/2006
That's so adorably cute! I love I love I love I love I love this story. No, this is not a grammar nightmare. Merely a stuttering idiot really...

Just the other day I was thinking of your story on the way home. This stranger smiled at me then when he walked by, I realized my cheeks were aching 'cause I'd been smiling like a retard.

Haha. I think I've been watching too much anime...I imagined Janie suddenly collapsing onto the ground when Kate suggested her.

Oh wow, are you Filipino too? (I just answered that question in my recent update but yes I am.) That would be so cool if you were. But I'd be so envious. It seems like I'm the crappiest Flip writer here or something. Lol.
siwonsiwon chapter 15 . 8/28/2006
aw adorabe T

i find it so sweet that he made sure to get her a room where he lived *cue awws*

he sounds so sweet, and not perfect, which makes it even better
cLauDiFooTaH chapter 15 . 8/28/2006
so this is gonna end soon? ( no! hehehehe i really like how this is progressing and i'm so eager to see how this would end, though i know it's gonna be a happy ending.. i'm quite disappointed because the monsters didn't do anything outrageous in this chapter.. i miss their antics..Ü
AshPen chapter 15 . 8/27/2006
about the yawning thing, it's really true. dunno about the scientific findings tho. lol! but still... omg! love it! love the kids, love the main characters, love the story, love u too! better update soon, or else. *evil grin* hmm. was just wonderin... will lala appear again in the scene? revenge is so sweet... :)
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