|Reviews for Janie and the Cretin|
| stars95 chapter 21 . 4/19/2011
This was really sweet! Really enjoyed reading it! I love how you made jonny and Natalie's pairing to be similar to that of mike and janie and the plot, conflict and everything else was very detailed. I hope you do write a sequel on them! :)
| Stubbornly Inept chapter 6 . 3/2/2011
I don't really understand how Nat crying over a girl in daycare pulling her hair is any different then her and Jhonny picking on the little girl next door. I like your story, but that does seem pretty mean.
| Kalilah chapter 21 . 11/6/2010
Ahah that was really sweet. Everyone grew up and graduated from all the high school drama; reading about Lala was sweet. Is there a hint for a new couple I see? Well I saw it when they were at their young, mischievous and innocent stage. Thanks for the great story. Kept me up since I couldn't stop reading. I knew I wouldn't be able to but I couldn't resist.
| Kalilah chapter 18 . 11/6/2010
I don't understand what just happened... I don't fully understand why he's reacting so badly. Argh I'm just going to read
| AranaBanana chapter 21 . 8/28/2010
That story was so amazing. I really, really loved it. And I insist on the really. Thanks a bunch for posting it on here, you've made me a happy froob. Hope you'll keep up with the good work
| jmn23 chapter 21 . 3/14/2010
I first read this way back years but can't remember if I ever finished it. I re-read it again today and all I can say this is a very sweet and witty story!
| ghurl00 chapter 21 . 10/15/2009
Super enjoyed reading this story! The conflict was really good and how you made johnny and natalie sort of like mike and janie.:D well done.:D
| Dustland chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
:) :) :) :) :)
| silentscream4luv chapter 21 . 9/1/2009
GREAT! I freaking LOVED IT!
| TammyS3 chapter 21 . 8/18/2009
Yay! Great story! But shouldn't the "Cretin" be capatalized? I got so confused because I stopped reading for a while and then started reading again and I'm like "Cretin? Where is this cretin?" Jokes, jokes! really great story!
| SunlitSky chapter 14 . 8/5/2009
Oh my gosh I love you! This is the cutest story! I almost died of happiness when I read his note to her. I wish I had a guy that would write those things to me. He is such a sweetie. This story is adorable and i can't wait to finish it. I am confused about one thing though. Why is she taking algebra as a senior? Especially when math is her favorite subject? I though algebra was usually taken by freshman. That the only question I have about this story. Other than that its amazing. It makes me deliriously happy. : )
| controlledsoul chapter 21 . 7/21/2009
Well, usually I wouldn't review a story, but it was just so cute-how could I resist? I loved it! Two characters especially-Mike, Creamy and Janie. The epilogue- for once actually satisfied me and well, I loved this story ) Good job and I hope to see more from you
| samora chapter 21 . 6/27/2009
i love your story its so cute and dont we all wish we had someone like mike in out lives but just wanted to let you kno that there were a few typos and stuff so i guess edit it a little but otherwise great story also do gavin and kate end up together and any chance you will resume the sequel.
seriously love this story
| Fayre Meira chapter 14 . 5/28/2009
I must have read this story a dozen times already, but I still cannot get over the emotions that you managed to portray so beautifully in the last couple of paragraphs. I really love it.
| renegade01 chapter 21 . 5/22/2009
Aww such fluffiness! Bless ya, thats probably the sweetest ending i've read in a long time. maybe you're sequel could be on Nat..? Anyway, nicely done. x